tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-70798237504537440132024-03-15T18:09:45.073-07:00CPE sample writingsWelcome to the biggest on-line collection of articles, essays, letters, reports, proposals and reviews for the CPE and CAE Cambridge English Exams. Teachers and students from all over the world arparticipate by submitting their writings. Support the Blog with a Paypal donation and I will correct your writing. For more info write me via Email (see my profile below). Enjoy the Blog !Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.comBlogger262125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-85035929412266508552019-10-27T11:11:00.000-07:002019-10-27T11:11:09.943-07:00CPE Essay Sample on Advertising<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">
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<span style="font-size: large;">The main topic discussed in both
paragraphs is outdoor advertising and how it interacts with people. While the
first <strike>one</strike> text embraces this form of publicity and its applications with the growth
of technology, the second one <u>criticizes</u> its invasiveness. <span style="color: red;">(American spelling)</span></span></div>
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<span lang="es"><span style="font-size: large;"><strike>On one hand </strike>On the one hand, "<i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">the excitement of advertising"</i> <u>describes how the purpose of this
marketing technique, which is involvement and getting into the customer’s mind,
allows it to be really prolific</u>.<span style="color: red;">(Check grammar)</span> Nonetheless, with the rapid growth of
technology, companies must hurry themselves to use <span style="color: red;">them</span> for their own good in
order to keep up to date and be displayed widely. Innovations like these are
opening a world of opportunities for companies due to their low costs and high
rates of interaction with the public.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span lang="es"><span style="font-size: large;"><strike>Meanwhile,</strike> On the other hand, "<i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">Advertising: a desirable business"</i><strike>, For
one thing, </strike>remarks how the situation has gone from billboards and unharmful
campaigns that could be easily ignored to a whole new level of surreptitious
publicity that keeps barraging potential customers with truckloads of products
that have been just launched into the market and become the talk of town which
is found excessive and not even practical.<span style="color: red;">(Sentence is too long: punctuation)</span> <strike>For another thing </strike>Furthermore people find
outrageous that companies <u>target people whose self-control is almost
non-existent <span style="color: red;">(Who do you mean? Children? Sounds rather rude) </span></u>and therefore accuse businesses of malpractice.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span lang="es"><span style="font-size: large;">On the whole, marketing is a necessary
and effective technique which allows an increase in revenues but <strike>whose</strike> which impacts
are usually belittled and might make people feel devoid of their privacy.
Cookies are a clear example of this, personally designed advertisements based
on what your searches on the internet are, suggest that maybe we have gone too
far in terms of creating a feeling that we are constantly being tracked by
companies. <span style="color: red;">(Why mention cookies at the last minute? Conclusion should be about what you already mentioned)</span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The aim of the report is to analyse the current situation of the
healthcare system in Spain, outlining the positive and negative points, as well as to <strike>stating</strike> to provide recommendations <strike>that could</strike> on how to make some improvement. </span></div>
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<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Current situation<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">It could be said that the healthcare in Spain is among the best ones around
the world, despite <strike>of</strike> the problems that we all could have in mind.<span style="color: red;"> (Which ones? We are not in Spain)</span> In order to
have a better understanding of it, I have done <span style="color: red;">(better in passive voice: a survey was carried out...)</span> a survey to different <i>players
</i>related to healthcare<i> </i><span style="color: red;">(players?? check!)</span> such as <strike>pacients</strike> patients, medical proffesionals, material
suppliers and pharmacies. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Seldom <i>have they mentioned <span style="color: red;">(why present perfect? check grammar)</span></i> positive points to be outlined, but the few
ones are the basis of the whole system:<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "symbol"; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol; mso-no-proof: yes;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">·<span style="font-family: "times new roman"; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"> - </span></span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The attention is free and guaranted to all <strike>the</strike> patients.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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and skillful, with a great experience in the field. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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updated capabilities.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">These are great positive remarks, albeit there are well-known negative
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"> -Waiting time to be attended is longer than it should be. Even
more for operations rather diagnosis. <span style="color: red;">(check grammar)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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entities to suppliers and to pharmacies) are too long.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The adjusted budget of the public entity determines that more
proffesionals, better <strike>instalations </strike>facilities and more fluent payments<i> is hardly to be
assumed at the same time</i>. <span style="color: red;">(check grammar)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">However, the possibility of co-payment in order to reduce the level of
overcrowding will give a release on the waiting lists and could be a plus to
enhance the payment terms in the supply chain.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Bearing in mind all the points detailed, we could say <span style="color: red;">(why in conditional?) </span>we have a great
healthcare system, whereas <span style="color: red;">(check the use of whereas)</span> some improvements need to be done to keep it in the
upper part of the world ranking. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">In my opinion, the co-payment recommendation would be a good starting
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<b>International Film Club Report 2018-2019</b></h2>
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<span lang="EN-GB"><strike>Reminiscing on the International Film Club’s (IFC) past year</strike><strike style="text-decoration-line: underline;"> </strike><span style="color: red;">(change or eliminate)</span><u>,</u> the
club’s <span style="color: red;">"</span>Italian film weekend<span style="color: red;">",</span> which was held in February<span style="color: red;">,</span> proved to be a great
success with many members expressing their encouragement. This leads (<span style="color: red;">past tense?)</span> the club’s
board to give consideration to a recurrence of the popular event in the year of
2020. Furthermore, the annual dinner with this year’s special guest John
Favreau held at the Shoreditch Hotel was <u>a well-attended success</u> <span style="color: red;">(change) </span>as ever.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB">In <strike>the year of</strike> 2019-2020, IFC is determined to bring even more
interesting cinematic insights to its esteemed members. Not only can the board
confirm it has recently tied down director Anthony Russo for a lecture on
suspense in blockbusters <span style="color: red;">(</span>scheduled to be held in December 2019 at the club’s
headquarters in London<span style="color: red;">)</span>, <span style="color: red;">but </span>it can also corroborate new plans of an advanced video
library. IFC members will be enabled to consult this database at the club’s
headquarters as well as at our website. <span style="color: red;">(In general some sentences are too long)<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB">This year’s earnings<u> consists of <span style="color: red;">(check "consist of")) </span></u>the contribution of 32 fresh
members and the generous £30,000 grant from the National Film Association. This
adds up to an income of £38,000. All outgoing expenses this year comprise the
renting of films and the purchase of new stationery, such as a suitable film
projector and the furnishing of the recently procured meeting room. These cost £20,100.
This leaves us with a rough grand total of £20,700 to spend on the organisation
of further club meetings. Everything taken into account, the International Film
Club will be faring well in the year of 2019-2020. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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being thrown away every week<strike>; as a matter of fact,</strike> Both governments and private
citizens are trying to do their best to enhance recycling. <s>This line of
reasoning should not make us safe and thoroughly</s> We should not be so
proud though, <s>insofar</s> as this seems not to be enough to
prevent situations like marine life from being irreversibly endangered. </span><span lang="IT" style="color: red; font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">(Re-write + Add a couple of lines
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highlights the <s>catastrophic effects of the fast pace of technological
change, according to which we normally go on being subdued to keeping</s> fact
that we keep electronic devices only for a short time. u<s>rthermore,
notwithstang their quality standards we seem to sometimes neglect, we merely
rely on flattering</s> Advertising messages compell us to discard our
present gadgets in favour of the latest ones. To a certain extent, remaining
backward turns out to be the greatest shortcoming to be feared by anyone
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consumerism, which is utterly affecting the environment because of the huge
amount of waste produced. In conclusion, mass consumerism should, therefore, be
legally discouraged <u>in favour of the implementation of mental
independence of clichés </u></span><u><span lang="IT" style="color: red; font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">(?? )</span></u><span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">, as well as of the
hyperconditioning and tantalising power of advertising which underlies wild
consumerism.</span><span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 18pt;"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-25934575681357861742019-03-22T01:30:00.001-07:002019-04-11T02:51:00.971-07:00CPE Article on Gap Year <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 12.0pt;">
<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><b>Hi everybody ! </b>I received this Article Sample from Debora. I post it here with some feedback.</span></div>
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">Unfortunately, I have to say I have some issues with it. To me it looks more like a job advertisement than an article. I would stronly suggest making changes. Take a look and feel free to provide your own feedback !</span></div>
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asked to write an article for Job Prospects magazine, a publication for 18-30
year olds, on the following topic:</span></div>
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<b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">How taking a gap year* can enhance your career prospects.</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">You should focus on
the types of job and leisure opportunities for young people taking a gap
year in your country (or a country that you know well), the types
of skills that can be gained and the likely value of these to potential
employers.<br />
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<b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Take a gap year and boost your career
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<span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">A gap year is a chance to figure
yourself out, get in contact with alternative ways of life and
enhance your skills. Besides, more than ever employers <u>are seeking for
talents beyond the knowledge itself.</u> </span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="color: red;">(What do you mean?) </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Having this experience will put
yourself in an unknown situation every day, strengthening your decision-making
capabilities. It will present you with the chance to become a better
version of yourself! It doesn’t matter if your gap year is just before college
or in mid-jobs; there is always room for improving old habits and creating good
new ones.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Have you ever considered living with
a host family in another country? Do you like kids? If you answered yes,
the Au pair program is for you! This authentic way to perceive a new culture
will change your life. Although living with another family may not be the
easiest job ever, you’ll learn to compromise, be gentle, caring and
responsible; it is an experience to take forever. .</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Are you an adventurous person who
would love to visit many countries? The Skills program is for you! There you
will visit around 10 and, from cooking to building a small house, you can
choose the skills you’d like to learn. It might be a unique opportunity to
understand more about your strengths and how to overcome obstacles.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">If altruism is your cup of tea,
volunteering is for you! Getting to know other ways of life and also
being able to give yourself and your time to improve other people's stories is
truly a worthy year gap!</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "calibri" , sans-serif; font-size: large; line-height: 107%;">These 3 options are not
even stretching the surface and a bunch of other alternatives are available in
the market. You should not miss out in this amazing opportunity and plan your
gap top-notch year!</span></div>
Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-35698632624436142322019-03-06T08:06:00.001-08:002019-04-11T02:52:13.712-07:00CPE Essay on Zoos Sample writing<br />
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Here there is a sample writing sent by Elena. My feedback is in red.</div>
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<a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSgFhOMv2JcTmgQNCMjQNbweTFKdRrMaHLC6qFnX6mRfUzIXuTtPg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de zoo" border="0" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSgFhOMv2JcTmgQNCMjQNbweTFKdRrMaHLC6qFnX6mRfUzIXuTtPg" /></a><span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Nowadays it is widely acknowledged how<strike> much it is</strike> important it is to protect and study endangered</span> species. Which better way to do it
than keeping animals in zoos? But to which extent do zoos really represent a salvation
for those animals? <span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;">(Suggestion: Use more adjectives like "utterly important")</span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Some people argue that animals living in zoos suffer, due to the limited areas they are restrained in. Moreover, the
majority of zoo-keepers use violence to “educate” animals, impinging on their
physical and psychological health.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>Animals in zoos are literally deprived of their freedom <strike>and living</strike> as they are force to live in
an artificial environment. <u>Humans can not learn much about their real habits
and behaviour. </u><span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;"> (Last sentence is not connected to the previous one).</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">On the other hand,
many members of the scientific community claim that zoos are fundamental for
the preservation of endangered species which, if left in the wild, would face
an inevitable and rapid extinction. These scientists take
into account the fact that humans actions have taken those animals to this
point, on the verge of their demise, therefore it is our responsibility to take
care of endangered species, intervening to save them from a threatening
environment. Nevertheless, the places in which only threatened species or injured animals are kept, in order to be looked after and eventually released in the wild, are just a few. Zoos are mostly entertainment means, visited every day by hundreds of people which are not fully aware of the pain the animals they are looking at are feeling.<span style="color: red;">(</span><span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;">In the intro you mentioned first that zoos are good for animals and then that maybe they are not so good. Then, you should follow the same order in the paragrpahs: paragraph 2 should be positive and paragraph 3 should be negative)</span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">To conclude, <u>it seems
obvious </u>that we need to create more structures where animals can be studied and
healed without compromising their life’s conditions, without using them for
ridiculous shows which only cause them pain. In order to do that, one of the
essential step is making our community aware of the critical situation our
world is living. <span style="color: red;">(<span style="font-size: xx-small;">Don't use "it seems obvious", it sounds too informal, plus, is it really that obvious? Don't use "ridiculous", avoid making strong judgements).</span></span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-42626660198403302742019-03-05T06:47:00.001-08:002019-04-11T02:53:41.841-07:00CPE Essay on Youth Culture<br />
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">The term
‘youth culture’ found its name in the 1960s. Young people changed their views
on several aspects of daily life. There are also people who have tried to
figure out what ‘youth culture’ involves. Both texts emphasize<strike><span style="color: red;">s</span></strike> style and innovations.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Text one
states that the switch among people started with a few rebellions in the 1960s.
Appreciating new music, arts, clothing styles and political views were part of
the alteration at the time. Besides the contempt, this ever growing group was
determined to maintain and extend their habits. The second text gives arguments
about what have caused ‘youth culture’. The author mentions that a certain
group of young people were manipulated by the availability of what is on the
market. Simultaneously, others have tried to depict the financial and social
circumstances of their environment.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">In my
opinion, we have to respect everyone whatever their political colours, habits
and styles are. To be honest, people should encourage <strike>those who</strike> other people to dare to step out
their comfort zone. Most of the time <span style="color: red;">it <strike>are</strike></span> is young people who come up with new
ideas. They are open-minded and a reflection of a particular period. Thereby, we
should keep in account the social and economic background where they live in. This
has a significant influence on their political ideas, creative minds and
stylistic opportunities. <span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;">(Consider revising. Not so sure what your point it. I suggest re-reading the last lines).</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">In
conclusion, ‘youth culture’ is a term which started in the 1960s. Through the
years young people envisage a quintessential period of that time. From my
perspective, we should support them because they are innovative and therefore
give colour to several aspects of our daily life.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-14882345767548225502019-03-05T06:11:00.001-08:002019-03-05T06:23:00.643-08:00Bad Restaurant Review <div style="text-align: justify;">
<span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;">Hello everybody. I received this "Bad Restaurant Review" from Alberto, who is studying for the Oficial School of Languages C2 English exam in Spain. I have posted his writing with some feedback in red. In general I think there are some positive points in his document like organising the text into paragraphs and addressing different aspects (location, service, quality of food,...) but some improvement needs to be done: the vocabulary is from B2/C1, not C2 and the style is rather informal and aggressive.</span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Yesterday I
had the unpleasant experience of <span style="color: red;">attending to</span> one of the most overrated
restaurants on the coast of Valencia. </span><strike>The name</strike> Its name, should you know, is “Els pins” and it is located on a kind of waste land which they
have the audacity to call landscape. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(In my opinion a little too aggressive. Check if the use of "attend to" is correct).</span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Once
inside, you are greeted with the most distasteful furniture. The tables and
chairs are simply dreadful and as for the table cloths there is only one thing
to be said and is that they are made of paper. </span>There is no
doubt that in this establishment, functionality is more important than any kind
of style. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Once again a little too harsh, which makes it sound childish/unprofessional to me, like written by an angry teenager)</span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">The service
is the sort one that one would expect form a fast food chain, but without its speed and
simplicity. </span>The
waitresses (all females) were more concerned about how they looked rather than
<u>who to look</u>. It seemed like a competition and the one to take the longest time attending a table was the winner. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">("who to look" not clear what you mean)</span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">After
having endured all this nonsense, the thought of enjoying a good meal seemed to
me impossible, this is when things turned really interesting. </span>We ordered
the infamous dish paella, we thought, what can go wrong? after all, we are in
Valencia birth place of rice dishes in Spain. What it was
presented to us was an unrecognisable mash of what seemed to be a mixture of
rice vegetables and a lonely chicken breast. At this point I had to convince
myself into trying it. You know
when they say, trust your first instincts. Well, I should have followed that
advice. The moment
I put the spoon into my mouth it felt like an explosion. It was as spicy as a
Tabasco soup. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Even thought it is a negative review, you could try softening it and making it more respectful. Also, the use of "you know" and the use of questions, make it very informal, and I don't know if this is a good idea).</span></div>
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time, I had enough of this torture and asked for the check. To my surprise the
previously deceptive waitresses came alive and rushed with the check as if
their life depended on it. </span>I won´t
comment on the price because whoever pays to be taken for a fool deserves to be
one. Never again
will I lay eyes on this sorry excuse of a restaurant. It is banned from my list
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<span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: x-small;"></span>Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-66407648147792914862019-02-26T03:43:00.002-08:002019-02-26T03:43:39.850-08:00CPE Essay on unsustainable tourismHi again! I just got this essay sample from John, from the Neatherlands. I post it below together with the task and some feedback. As always, feel free to comment below.<br />
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Enjoying
a holiday after a period of hard work is what most people appreciate. <u>Once the
journey has been taken place to a particular holiday destiny you become a
tourist at a place where more travellers can be found.</u> Such crowded places
cannot always manage these waves of people during a certain period and that is
what both texts have in common. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Consider re-writing the intro. I don't see much connection between the lines. Second line also sounds "unnatural" to me).</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Text one
states that an engulfment of tourists causes problems in a variety of aspects.
One of them is the rubbish people leave behind on the beaches <u>or elsewhere in
nature</u>. Cities and villages are jam-packed with cars and other vehicles as well
as public buildings are crammed with itinerants. Last but not least is the
alteration of jobs of the local inhabitants. All this could be a problem
although it also could have benefits. Newly started jobs like cleaners, tour
guides, public transport drivers and hotel employees are examples of how to
turn the downside into a positive view. Therefore an open-mind set is needed. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Check "engulfment of tourists", never heard that before. "...elsewhere in nature" seems like your vocabulary repertoire is limited. I also see the task is full of advanced vocabulary while your text is rather simple).</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Text two
mentions that before touristic spots turn into enticing places they are first
negatively developed because of the damage tourists can cause. The amelioration
of such places has most of the time more to do with the public view rather than
with an long-lasting improvement. In my opinion, the focus should be on a
long-term policy which attracts more holidaymakers in the future. This will
enhance the sustainability of a touristic area.<span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;"> (Consider re-writing the paragraph. I don't think it summurises the essence of text two)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">In conclusion,
where travellers pay a visit to a specific region during the same period this
can lead to certain difficulties. When the locals have a growth-mind set they
are able to tackle these problems. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Way too vague!)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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Dear John, I am sorry to say that you need to step it up ! Best regards and the best of luck in the exam!</div>
Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-85905595017296579712019-02-25T01:49:00.002-08:002019-02-25T01:49:35.179-08:00CAE Letter to a friend<h3 style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
<span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-size: small;">Hallo everybody, this time I have a post from Clemente, who is taking the CAE exam next month. I find his sample very well-written and an excellent example of an effective use of idioms in informal writing. </span></span></h3>
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My new job is great, and next month I get to travel on business. Guess what - I'm actually coming to your town for a week! I'll be free some evenings and one weekend. I want to make the most of this opportunity, so I'd like your advice please: where to go, what to do, and why?</div>
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Cheers,</div>
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Dear Chris</div>
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It's so nice to hear from you! Congrats on the new opportunity that you have to travel on business. You know, the moment I read you were coming to my town, I went like "OMG, that's brilliant!". I'm chuffed to bits, truly! I hope we can get to spend some time together to catch up and chew the fat.</div>
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Anyway, while you are here, you can't miss <i>Areadocks</i>; I'm sure you will have a ball there. <i>Areadocks</i> is a really fancy pub right in the centre of the city, where everybody is always dressed to kill and the food is absolutely scrumptious! I mean, you're a foodie and always very elegantly dressed, so this is your place, man. You must give <i>Areadocks</i> a go!</div>
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<span style="color: #222222;">Also, you may want to check out the big bookshop near the main theatre of the city. For a bookworm like you, <i>Libraccio</i> is</span><span style="color: red;"> unmissable</span><span style="color: #222222;">. I bet you'll feel like in a fairy tale when you enter </span><i style="color: #222222;">Libraccio</i><span style="color: #222222;">. You're going to find tons of books - both new and second-hand - which are not very expensive. The staff there is incredibly friendly and competent. I mean, ok, if you work in a bookshop you should know about books, right? But mate, the people who work there are not human! The second you tell them you're looking for this or that title, they start giving you loads of facts on the book, the author, the plot, the characters, AND the publishing house, too! UNBELIEVABLE! </span><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Consider checking if ""unmissable" works well there)</span></div>
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All right, I guess that's all for now. Please do let me know when you arrive here so we can meet up somewhere.</div>
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Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-78130442909972436122019-02-23T01:20:00.001-08:002019-02-23T01:26:28.616-08:00CAE Essay on "who should receive the money?"<br />
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<span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">In today's world, hardly a day goes by <strike>when we do
not hear</strike> without us hearing of recreational centres such as clubs, cinemas or amusement parks
being provided with plenty of money in order to offer the best services on the
market. </span><span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">However, are these the only facilities which should
receive money? </span><span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Is it so? where? who provides the money? how much? why?)</span></span></div>
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<span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">First and foremost, I feel local authorities ought
to consider the invaluable role museums play: a museum is the only way we have
to dive into our past, our history, our forebear's way of life. Unfortunately,
we - victims of an "e-world", where what we used to watch in fantasy
movies has now become reality - are beginning to drift away from these precious
facilities.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">However, to my mind, museums should receive money
so as to draw more and more people with a view to learning and becoming
familiar with ancient cultures and traditions.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Not sure if museums are "the only way" to dive into our past, but I think you can find a better argument, and maybe mention the world "children" somewhere).</span></span></div>
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<span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">On the other hand, green spaces are losing their
appeal, as well. Some public gardens, unfortunately, have now become a sad
depiction of people's inconsiderateness towards nature: places filled with plastic,
cigarette butts and little ponds full of everything but clear water and lovely
fish. </span><span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">I strongly believe local authorities ought to
provide public gardens with funds<u> in order to render them clean and appealing</u>
for tourists, as well as for the people who go jogging or those who simply wish
to recharge their batteries and escape from the hustle and bustle of everyday
life. </span><span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Check grammar there. Maybe also use words like "sustainability" or "global.warming"...) </span></span></div>
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<span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">All in all, if I were a member of a city council, I
would undoubtedly give priority to museums; I would endeavour to try and start new
stimulating projects, as these centres allow us to go on terrific tours of our
history, thanks to which we can learn a lot about our origins and how we have
reached our modern era. </span><span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Well...it doenst make much sense. In the last paragraph you said we need to save parks and in the end you recommend giving the money to the museum. Make up your mind!)</span></span></div>
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Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-52043369037691090512019-02-21T07:59:00.000-08:002019-02-22T01:32:58.795-08:00CPE Essay on conventions imposed by society<div dir="ltr">
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With the CPE exam coming soon, I have started to receive some emails asking for help. Well, I am glad to give you a hand! </div>
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The following CPE sample was submitted by Donato. In the following lines you can see the task, the writing and some <span style="color: red;">feedback in colour red.</span></div>
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Nowadays, in some cultures there may often be confusion between generations about what is <br />
acceptable behaviour in certain situations. Older people sometimes complain, for example, about the real or imagined rudeness of others, such as in the use of electronic devices in public places. However, the younger generation do not regard electronic communication as intrusive, but rather as fundamental to their way of life. Only increased mutual understanding is likely to resolve potential conflict or confusion in any society. In this case, as in all others, it pays to be aware of other people’s points of view. </div>
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Should we always aim to do what society expects of us? No, what society needs is individuality. Worrying about what other people think inhibits enthusiasm and creativity. Nothing new is ever achieved by conforming to expected social norms. This is not only true for society’s innovators: everybody needs a strong sense of their own worth as an individual. This is essential for psychological well-being and the ability to function effectively in one’s personal and professional life. Paying too much attention to society’s conventions can be counter-productive in these and other ways. </div>
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Both texts deal with the modern issue of conventions imposed by society. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Is this your introduction, half a line? too short!)</span></div>
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The first text emphasises the gap between what was considered socially acceptable some years ago and the current trends. For instance, walking about with your eyes glued to a monitor is commonplace nowadays, but older generations who have had a different upbringing consider it contemptible. This leads to misunderstandings and, in the worst case scenario, even to conflicts. The only way to prevent such phenomena is to raise awareness of other people’s points of view and respect them.<span style="font-size: x-small;"> <span style="color: red;">(Somehow I don't like the use of theverb "emphasise" in the first sentence. Maybe a preposition is missing? </span></span><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">Pls check on that.</span><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">)</span></div>
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Conversely, the author of the second text champions individualism and highlights how crucial it is to innovation. If we were always expected to play by an extremely strict set of rules, our creativity and critical thinking skills would be stifled and no progress would come of this. Furthermore, the text makes particular mention of the benefits that thinking with our own mind can have on our mental well-being and career. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Crucial to or crucial for? I believe it is crucial for + noun)</span></div>
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Living in the era of globalization, we have to come to terms with the world views of people from all walks of life and, therefore, it is imperative that we exert some of the tolerance mentioned in the first text. However, this does not have to happen at the expense of our own individuality which we have to nurture and preserve. Being ourselves when we are in a private environment and observing social norms when we are in public is surely a good compromise that will enhance the quality of our lives in the long term.</div>
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Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-89554002263530670732019-02-20T12:17:00.001-08:002019-02-20T12:25:20.885-08:00CPE Report on the Job Fair<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Hi everyone, I'm back! First of all I want to apologise for not posting in a while. I was terribly busy with my master studies! </span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">I will try to answer to all your e-mails. Btw, you can now also contact me via Facebook or via Instagram: </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: blue;">Albarracin8015</span></span><br />
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international organizations and companies to promote careers available for
young people. You have been asked to write a report of the jobs fair for your
college website. You should briefly describe the event and identify two or
three promotions of particular interest and relevance. You should also evaluate
the extent to which such events can open young people’s minds to new challenges
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">The aim of this report is to discuss the jobs fair
that is yearly held in the Borough of Fulham, evaluating the <strike>important</strike> role it
plays on young people’s career choices. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Intro is too short. I would erase the word "important" because it sounds like a conclusion)</span><span style="color: #222222;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Following the task I was given by my college, I have
written this report to bring into focus the main features of this acclaimed
jobs fair which only came to an end last Saturday. The event was originally
designed to tackle youth-related unemployment <u>with the objective to</u> bringing
its percentage down to 23% in the next two years. Not only does it entail an
assistance team which offers one-to-one consultation sessions with an expert
during the week, but it also made arrangements for individual job interviews
with well-known organisation chiefs who are intended to hire new teenagers. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Check grammar: with the objective to... )</span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">The event offered multiple job opportunities in
several sectors, ranging from the transportation to the marketing business. The
food industry deserves a particular mention due to the enormous exhibitions
regarding the history of the most common aliments and their production methods.
The beauty field also offered one-day massage courses for aspiring
aestheticians. Given the high quality standard of the jobs fair, I decided to
attend it for a day and interview some of the visitors to ask for their
opinion. What emerged from this survey is presented in the following paragraph.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Due to their limitative policy of job offers for the
youth, most of the visitors turned out to be between the age of 18 and 25.
Nonetheless, a remarkable figure of younger people were present that day,
claiming their high interest in discovering more about employment orientation
and upcoming careers. Most of the interviewees stated to have changed their
views on the job world thanks to the event, however a small number of them made
complaints about the numerous crowd which impeeded a smooth flow of people at
times.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(I would change the title for "survey on popularity of the job fair")</span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Clearly, such events draw the young public’s
attention, which is more and more on their first job opportunities that will
guide them into the professional world, and due to the positive feedback of the
fair, I would recommend its reiteration in the coming years. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(I would not use the word "clearly". Check the first and second lines, they don't make much sense).</span></span></div>
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/></a><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="color: #222222;"><span style="color: #4d4d4d;"><span style="background: rgb(242, 242, 239);">Dear
Gustavo,</span></span></span><span style="color: #222222;">I
hope you can help me by correcting one of my essays, as I am taking
the CPE next week.</span></span></h2>
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<span style="color: #282828;"><span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, </span></span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.</span></div>
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<span style="color: #282828;"><span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">My answer:</span></span></div>
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<span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="font-size: large;">An Opinion Essay (CPE Exam): </span></span></span></h3>
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<span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="font-size: large;">Teenagers in my country</span></span></span></h3>
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<span style="color: blue;">Feedback in blue. A couple of words were added.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="color: #282828;">There
are a lot of negative opinions out there, when it comes to </span><span style="color: blue;">the </span><span style="color: #282828;">younger
generation. Some people claim they are too dependent on technology,
as they are often seen spending a lot of time on their smartphones,
even sometimes choosing online communication over real one. </span></span></span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">Additionally, there have been <strike>instances</strike> cases of older people speaking
against </span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">teenagers' <strike>habit of</strike> being too sensitive and taking offence in
everything.</span></div>
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<span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">However, when you look at the history of mankind, you are
likely to find many <strike>instances </strike>cases of older generation </span><span style="color: blue; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">members </span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">disliking something
about the new one. As a result, it makes me wonder if the
criticism we're so eager to express is just a form of resisting
any sort of change, or maybe even progress.</span></div>
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<span style="color: #282828;"><span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><strike>On
the other hand,</strike> There is evidence of the new generation being
affected by technology in a good way as well, making them more
connected and more engaged both socially and politically. Moreover,
technological advancements make various education tools available to
them, making it possible for younger people to learn about this world
without having to go to the library. This leads to a yearly increase
in young people getting higher education, and therefore benefits our
society in a significant way. In addition to that, it is my opinion
that in being 'too sensitive' the new generation is examining the
existing societal norms and trying to be more inclusive, promoting
diversity and individuality. </span></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="color: #282828;">So
what can we do in order to come together despite or obvious personal
differences? It is my belief that there should be a step in the
direction of an open-minded and constructive conversation and even
discussion from both sides. By engaging in a respectful interaction,
we might be able to show each other that our world-views don't need
to be defined by our age. As a matter a fact, </span><strike style="color: #282828;">trying to show</strike><span style="color: #282828;"> </span><span style="color: blue;">highlighting</span><span style="color: #282828;"> the
benefits of technology, instead of focusing on the negative
aspects, might end up bringing both generations closer together.</span></span></span></div>
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you in advance.</span></span></span></div>
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Regards,</span></span></span></div>
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<span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">Jeka</span></span></span></div>
<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-64633370743845276812018-11-10T06:11:00.000-08:002018-12-01T04:44:37.833-08:00CPE Cambridge Exam. Essay on "The financial cost of stress" <h2 style="background-color: white; color: #222222; text-align: justify;">
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-weight: normal;">D</span><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-weight: normal;">ear Gustavo,</span></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="font-weight: normal;">I hope this email finds you well. My name is José V - I am sitting the CPE in three</span></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="font-weight: normal;"> weeks'</span></span><span style="font-size: small; font-weight: normal;"> time, so I was wondering if you could have a look at my writing task. Massive thanks for your hard work; I have been following your website for a while now and, in all honesty, it is a treasure trove of fantastic materials!</span></h2>
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The Financial cost of Stress</h3>
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society. People from different demographics claim to suffer from mental unrest
on a daily basis; a state of affairs that has led organisations to realise the
importance of dealing with it. The two texts discuss the intricacies of the
problem alongside some ways in which it can be <span style="color: red;">combatted</span>.<span style="color: red;"> (Would prefer a different verb)</span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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employees and, ultimately, the companies themselves. The author argues that
stress can cause a wide range of ailments amongst the workforce, resulting in
financial losses. Employers are urged to become better informed of
psychological issues to tackle them more effectively. While I wholeheartedly
agree that there should be more emphasis placed on mental illnesses, I believe
that attention should be diverted from mere financial matters. Instead, we
should investigate the reasons why employees suffer from such problems in an
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shameful about requesting assistance. Our appearance-obsessed society is
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #333333; font-family: "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: 10.5pt;">Raising the Bar or School Sports<br />The National Sports Academy is running a series of workshops aimed at encouraging more teenagers to get involved in sport. The workshops are for teachers and will look at how to promote the numerous benefits of physical exercise and team sports to school pupils. 'Exercise helps to maintain a stable weight, strengthen bones and reduces the risk of stress-related illnesses.' explained Tim Collins, the Academy Director. 'Aside from health benefits taking part in competitive sports gives teenagers a chance to experience the highs and lows of a competition, as well as instilling discipline, responsibility and commitment - all valuable life skills.'<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #333333; font-family: "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: 10.5pt;">Sport Seen as Uncool<br />teenagers are spending less time on physical exercise because they find it deeply 'uncool', according to a survey of teachers and pupils. The problem is most prevalent amongst older teenagers. Girls are uncomfortable about sharing sports classes with boys and avoid swimming lessons because of a fear that it will spoil their hairstyles. And both sexes were scathing in the survey about the unfashionable PE uniform that had to be worn. The choice of sports available was also too limited. Teachers said they would like to see codes for sports kits relaxed, single sex physical education classes and a wider range of activities to combat the decline in activity.<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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text states that teenagers are less interested in sports nowadays. <span style="color: red;">(Repetitive) </span>For that
reason the National Sports Academy promotes workshops for teachers to learn how
to develop a taste for sports in young students, pointing both its physical
benefits and life skills derived from competition. <span style="color: red;">(Make paragraph longer + add opinion)</span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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this unappeal for sports. The main problem seems to be the shyness boys and
girls feel when sharing a sports class. They feel self-conscious due to the
compulsory uniform or because their looks are going to be spoilt, therefore,
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who are in constant denial to anything that might be given as a health benefit. <span style="color: red;">(Make this paragraph a conclusion)</span></span></span></div>
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Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-88755972404792115952018-10-09T06:21:00.002-07:002018-12-01T04:54:31.312-08:00CAE Cambridge Exam: Proposal on Staff Morale<h2>
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/></a><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Hello Gustavo </span><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I send you my writing. If there is any problem I would be grateful if you let me know. </span></span><span style="font-size: small;"><br /><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Claustre</span></span></span></h2>
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<span style="font-size: small; font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Thanking you in advance, </span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></h2>
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<b style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; text-align: justify;">Task type: Proposal (English level B2)</b><br />
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"><b>Question:</b></span></span><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"> You
work in the sales department of a large company. You have been asked
to reply to this memo from the company's Personnel Officer:</span></span></span></span></div>
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<b style="color: #333333;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Internal
Memo</span></b></div>
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">From:
Personnel Officer</span></div>
<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">To: Sales Department</span></span></div>
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><br /></span></span></div>
<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">
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Owing to recent
changes within the company we are experiencing some problems with
staff motivation. Please write a proposal giving your opinion of the
following suggestions for improving staff morale:</div>
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<ol>
<li><div style="background: rgb(206, 227, 246); margin-bottom: 0.18cm; margin-top: 0.18cm; text-align: justify;">
<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">A
party for the whole department.</span></span></div>
</li>
<li><div style="background: rgb(206, 227, 246); margin-bottom: 0.18cm; margin-top: 0.18cm; text-align: justify;">
<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">A
weekend away for the most successful sales team.</span></span></div>
</li>
<li><div style="background: rgb(206, 227, 246); margin-bottom: 0.18cm; margin-top: 0.18cm; text-align: justify;">
<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">A
monetary prize for the best salesperson.</span></span></div>
</li>
</ol>
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">I
would appreciate any other suggestions.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"><br /></span></span></span>
<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES">Write
the </span></span><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"><b>proposal</b></span></span><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"> to
the Personnel Officer. (between 220-260 words)</span></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b>Proposal on Staff Morale</b></span></h3>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES">This
proposal is intended to highlight the current problem with staff
motivation in our company and <strike>give </strike>provide some ideas on how to improve that issue.
</span></span>
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<span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u>STAFF MOTIVATION PROBLEMS</u></span></div>
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<span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Add a paragraph here and explain what the problem is.</span></div>
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><u>A
PARTY FOR A WHOLE DEPARTMENT</u></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;">I
believe that could be a good option to improve relationships between
people of different departments and consequently straighten up the link
with all members of the company. </span><span style="color: red;">Nevertheless, in an expensive option (check)</span><span style="color: #333333;">
although the results might be satisfactoy.</span></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><u><span style="color: #333333;">A
WEEKEND AWAY FOR THE MOST SUCCES</span><span style="color: red;">S</span><span style="color: #333333;">FUL SALES TEAM</span></u></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES">I
am of the opinion that encouraging employees to achive high
objectives is a good way to improve the benefits of the company but
I also believe that this could contribute to create tension between
departments and the overall cosecuences could be not as good as we
expected. </span></span>
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<span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><u>A
MONETARY PRIZE FOR THE BEST SALESPERSON</u></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;">My
viewpont of this option is that this might create discrepances
between employees. Furthermore, will discourage the spirit of
co-operation tha our company strives for. Despite that, is probably
the most economocical of the options. </span><span style="color: red;">(So what do you propose instead?)</span></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u>CONCLUSION</u></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;">On
balance</span><span style="color: red;"> I would be decided (check)</span><span style="color: #333333;"> for the party despite the fact that is
the most expensive option because I strongly believe that coud be an
excelent way to improve employees motivation and also encourage
relationships between different members of the staff. In addition, </span><span style="color: red;">I
opine</span><span style="color: #333333;"> </span><span style="color: red;">(check</span><span style="color: #333333;">) that to give facilities to attend seminaries, congres and other
formation courses would help to enhace staff motivation, and as a
result the company would probably improve its benefits. </span></span>
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<span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Final feedback</span></div>
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<span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Writing not up to CAE level. Organisation and level of vocabulary need to be improved.</span></div>
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Recommendation: Write a title, divide the text in 4 paragraphs only (Intro, Problem, Proposals, Conclusion) and improve the level of vocabulary used.Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-70270626490191872832018-09-04T05:41:00.001-07:002018-12-01T04:56:45.612-08:00CPE Cambridge Exam: Report on a Jobs Fair<h2>
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span lang="EN-US" style="background-color: white; color: #222222;">Hello Gustavo, </span><span lang="EN-US" style="background-color: white; color: #222222;">This is another piece of writing I worked on. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="background-color: white; color: #222222;">Thanks for your hard work and dedication! </span></span></h2>
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was recently held in your town for international organizations and companies to</span><span style="color: #222222; font-size: 12pt;"> promote careers available for young people. You have been asked to write a
report of the jobs fair for your college website. You should briefly describe
the event and identify two or three promotions of particular interest and
relevance. You should also evaluate the extent to which such events can open
young people’s minds to new challenges and career opportunities. Write
your </span><b style="color: #222222; font-size: 12pt;">report</b></span><span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">Introduction</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">The aim of this
report is to provide an overview of the jobs fair held in Valencia, as well as
to identify the promotions of more relevance and discuss to what extend events
such as this, can benefit students in our college. <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">Overview and best promotions</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">Multiple
international organizations met together at the Exhibition Centre last
Saturday, September 1. Around 2,000 students from the region attended this
annual event. Many programs were launched in this edition, with two of them
clearly standing out. <o:p></o:p></span><br />
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">The first one, was the one of the Berkeley
University in California. They presented their new work and study program,
especially addressed to business students. Hundreds applied for a chance to study
in the USA and work for a Californian Start-up. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">The second one came from Amsterdam’s Queen University, offering a remunerated internship
for future language teachers. </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red;">(Improve connection between sentences : use of connectors /linking words)</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> </span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">New challenges and career opportunities</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><strike>(Text was deleted) </strike>Here write what the task asks for: </span><span style="color: #222222; font-size: 16px;">You should also evaluate the extent to which such events can open young people’s minds to new challenges and career opportunities. </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;"><strike>After careful
and rigorous data assessment, I would highly encourage universities to</strike> not only
continue to promote this event but also to provide sessions in order for future
candidates to better understand the magnificent impact this type of experience
would provide to their careers. </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: red;">(Are you writing recommendations for univerties? or for your university? Who reads the University website? Students? Maybe you should write to them,).</span></span></span></div>
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<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0Spain40.463667000000008 -3.749220000000036614.533696500000008 -45.057814000000036 66.393637500000011 37.559373999999963tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-46766965314212363292018-09-03T04:05:00.004-07:002018-09-23T04:42:08.271-07:00CPE Spain 2018 Writing Sample and feedback<div dir="ltr" style="line-height: 1.38; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: justify;">
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<span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">Hello Gustavo, </span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span></span></h2>
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<span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">First, thanks for sharing such wise information on your blog. I will soon take the English C2 test on writing as it was the only part I failed back in May. </span></span></span><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">I would like this piece of writing to be checked if possible. </span></span></span></h2>
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span><a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSd5duvH2Go0iDW2Ga0s5WrfuKPfysxJitkNscS8vrvbpF0QBLX" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de couch potato" border="0" height="220" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSd5duvH2Go0iDW2Ga0s5WrfuKPfysxJitkNscS8vrvbpF0QBLX" width="320" /></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-size: 13px; text-align: left; white-space: normal;"><b>Writing task:</b> </span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">You have recently read an article from a youth magazine on the problem of inactivity in</span></span><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; text-align: left;"> young people. The magazine has invited its readers to respond to the topic by writing a short article of their own, which answers the following questions:</span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">Why are our young people becoming 'couch potatoes', and what can we do to solve the problem?</span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">And this is my article!</span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">Thanks in advance, </span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">N. B</span></span></div>
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<span style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">“<b>Millennial’s indoor
syndrome” on the verge of becoming </b></span><span style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><b>the newest disease concern of our time</b>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">“I have to do
something about this. I can only think of playing </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">on-line</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> games </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">and</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> binge-watch</span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">ing</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> the latest
released series on Netflix. <s>and</s> I can already acknowledge that my
sedentary <s>beacon of living</s> </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">way of life </span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">is simply not right”, says Juan Manuel, a 17 year old
from Madrid, who was recently diagnosed with severe overweight. Juan Manuel’s
unpleasant experience is becoming less anecdotal as health pundits have already
raised a red flag alerting of what is <s>been</s> </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">being</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> called
“Millennial’s indoor syndrome”. </span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">What is causing
such </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">a</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> loss of
interest in outdoor activities? And to what extent is this affecting other
young people in Spain? The latest data from the National Research Institute
shows how this is not an isolated case any more. Back in time, youngsters used to go to the park to do some sport and talk to each other in person, but
communication tools such as WhatsApp and multiplayer video games have changed that.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">(Insert hier some
statistics from the National Reseach Institute ??)</span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Not long ago,
this foreseen scenario was only a vague apprehension and, as predicted by
experts, it’s become an outright concern </span></s><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Experts
believe Milennial's indoor syndrome is</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> caused by two
different reasons. Firstly, parents are no longer spending quality time with
their children due to higher pressure on their jobs. Secondly, media is
aggressively targeting millennials into mobile devices consumption, resulting
in less encouragement for physical activity. </span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Even this
highly conconcerning reality,</span></s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> Good news is,
details about an action plan are about to be released by the current Ministry
of Health and Well-being. After a first press conference, where only sparse
information was given, it seems that a notable shift in work and personal
balance is about to happen, probably moving into a 35 hour work week. </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">(That deals with reason number one, but what about reason number two "media aggressively targeting
millenials? What are they going to do about that?)</span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">When </span></s><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">If</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> officially
announced, </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">this would mean </span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">parents are going to be able to spend longer hours
with their children </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">and hopefully do some sport together. </span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Further measures such as organising talks on the
importance of doing physical activities is advised. </span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-1281524059160650762018-08-02T03:15:00.002-07:002018-09-23T04:41:26.211-07:00Writing a report for the CPE exam. Sample and feedback<h2>
<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;">Hi Gustavo<span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Thanks for taking the time
to read this, </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Martina.</span></span></h2>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><i><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222;">A jobs fair was recently
held in your town for international organisations and companies</span></i></span><i style="font-family: "Trebuchet MS", sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"> to promote
careers available for young people. You have been asked to write a report of
the jobs fair for your college website. You should briefly describe the event
and identify two or three promotions of particular interest and relevance. You
should also evaluate the extent to which such events can open young people’s
minds to new challenges and career opportunities.</span></i></div>
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<i><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Write your report in
280-320 words.</span></i><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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to describe a jobs fair that was recently held in our town. As well as, to identify<strike>ing</strike> interesting and relevant promotions made by the companies and
organisations; </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: #3d85c6;">and to evaluate<strike>ing</strike> whether the event opened the youngsters’ minds or
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">For the first time in a
while the jobs fair was held in the city. It was at the Town Hall, where there
is plenty of space </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: #3d85c6;">to came out such a big event</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">. </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">(check!) </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">The fair was well-organised;
there was a general topic per day, and each there were not only interactive
talks and presentations but also some engaging games. The general topics were
Physical science, Art, Medicine and Social science. For example, the first day,
Physical science, there were stands which presented different projects that
were done by students who had finished </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">their <strike>career </strike>studies.</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">All promotions were
particularly eye-catching but the one which kept me spellbound during all the
presentation was civil engineer. The announcer said such compelling words that
everyone was sure that is </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">one of the best careers</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">. Summarising, he said there
is a wide variety of job opportunities around the world, so you could also have
the chance to travel. Besides, it requires a lot of skills, what make </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">the
career </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">challenging. Furthermore, tourism manager was a protagonist during the
fair. It is a really strenuous job, which involves having a great deal of
general knowledge. </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">Despite, you would be able to travel virtually all the world
as a lot of cultural knowledge is needed. (check!)</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Evaluation of the benefits
of the event</span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">As far as I know, this kind
of event, whether they have a good organisation or not, are entirely beneficial
to the students; due to the fact that present </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">careers </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">which are not that common
and that students might not be aware of. Besides, s</span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">ome of the careers does</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"> take
a short time studying what it is important for some adolescents. Also, those
</span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">careers</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"> are much more challenging than the ones everybody knows.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Conclusion</span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">:</span><span style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">To sum up, it was not only
worthy to go to the event, but also a good movement made by our local
authorities as it is interesting and beneficial for the student´s life.</span><span style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Well-organised text. Task was fulfilled. </span></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Style is rather too informal, I would say. </span></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Check: vocabulary: use of "career"</span></o:p></span></div>
<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-1379337853659660592018-07-10T13:04:00.001-07:002018-09-23T04:21:56.731-07:00CPE 2018 Report on a jobs fair Sample<h2>
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span style="background-color: white; font-size: 12pt;">Hi Gustavo,</span><span style="background-color: white; font-size: 12pt;">Please, could you check my report? </span><span style="font-size: 12pt;">Thanks,</span><br />Alicia</span></h2>
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<a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQAhWznNFmHyNNOvy2iURcu_LqpKFzEvl0hAKlHEL-Z51QWrx9S" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de jobs fair young people" border="0" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQAhWznNFmHyNNOvy2iURcu_LqpKFzEvl0hAKlHEL-Z51QWrx9S" /></a><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">A jobs fair was recently held in your town for
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young people. You have been asked to write a report of the jobs fair for your
college website. You should briefly describe the event and identify two or
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the extent to which such events can open young people’s minds to new challenges
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Last June I had the opportunity to attend an international jobs fair
<strike>which was</strike> hosted by Barcelona University <strike>from 3<sup>rd</sup> to 6<sup>th</sup>
June</strike>. It was aimed not only at Barcelona University’s students but also at young
people wishing to broaden their career horizons. There were a handful of stands
promoting job offers, in which it was possible to leave your Curriculum Vitae,
so it was a pretty good chance for those looking for employment <strike>who wanted to be taken into
consideration</strike>. This was <strike>regarded as</strike> also a great opportunity to make networking. <strike>build contacts in
their field of expertise, which could have a positive impact in their jobs
prospects in the future</strike>. <span style="color: red;">(Description of the event is missing. Were there speakers? Was it possible to eat there? How many companies took part? What kind of jobs were available?) </span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">P<strike>ersonally
speaking, I would go as far as to say that there were two promotions which were
exceptionally fascinating</strike>. <span style="color: red;">(Sounds really old-fashioned) </span>The first one was from a company called Star, which
offered a job position as a cultural mediator. They were actively seeking for
young people who were fluent in at least two languages and knew how to manage themselves
in an intercultural atmosphere. Also, they were willing to offer a training
course for those interested. <strike>so even if the applicants were not familiar with
the cultural background required, they would be suitable for the job. </strike><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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second promotion that drew my attention, it was from California University.
They were offering job positions as a Spanish teacher abroad, and it was
particularly interesting due to the fact that candidates had the chance to
become members of the investigation team of the university. <strike>Therefore,
regardless of their branch of knowledge, applicants could teach Spanish and
also advance their careers by investigating in a prestigious university.</strike><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<u><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Conclusions<o:p></o:p></span></u></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">I general, I can
say that the jobs fair surpassed any expectations I had. In my opinion, this
was an eye-broadening experience as young people were able to see the reality
in the job market, and also to lean towards a different path in their careers.
For instance, some of my friends had never thought of teaching Spanish until
they attended the fair.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-1073621722840327582018-07-07T03:33:00.002-07:002018-09-29T07:14:28.649-07:00CAE and CPE Writing training: Formal letter Sample and feedback<br />
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<span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Hi again Gustavo,</span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I hope you are fine!</span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Could you please take a look at my letter? As always, I'll share and like!</span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Thank you again for your previous feedback, it has been really useful and even though I keep making mistakes I feel more confident now about my writing, because now I know what to do in order to improve. </span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Thank you!</span></span></h2>
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<span lang="EN-GB">Dear Diana, <span style="color: red;">(Is Dear Diana formal enough?)</span></span></h3>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I attended the leadership course which took place in Barcelona
University last June. I am writing to give you my impressions on<strike> such</strike> the course, which in my humble opinion, is one of the best courses I have had the pleasure
<strike>to attend. </strike>of going to. <span style="color: red;"><strike>(</strike>Not to use the word "attend" twice) // (You should mention what kind of course that was)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">To be honest, I believed that it would fall short on my expectations,
as I have previously <strike>attended </strike>been to other courses of similar nature not resulting to
be quite what I had hoped for. However, I can undoubtedly say that this course
was exceptional -the contents, the instructor and the methods were ideal to
accomplish the goal of the course. Arguably, what I liked the most was the role
play <strike>game </strike>activity, in which we had the opportunity to face a “real” situation, in which
we could put in practise the <strike>mechanisms</strike> theory we had previously learnt. Not only<strike> it</strike>
was htat fascinating, but also the instructor’s feedback. <strike>-Evaristo was exceptionally
empathic and did know how to lead us to the right path. </strike><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">As a matter of fact, I am currently using what I learnt in the course, in my job as a project manager. I
balance both work and studies, so I started applying some of your time-management techniques. No
sooner had I started using them, than my partners perceived the sudden change. They
say that I have improved my work.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Moreover, this leadership course is aimed at a labour environment,
but it can also be applied in other aspects of life. Being an introvert person,
I have always had trouble when having a conversation over the phone or even
when having a face to face with any unknown person. However, after taking this
course, I feel more comfortable in these daily situations and I am confident
that my stress level has decreased significantly, improving therefore my life
quality. <span style="color: red;">(I would change the whole paragraph. Not clear what kind of course it was. You should clarify that in paragraph one)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I cannot thank you enough for organising this course. It has
significantly helped me in many ways, and I am thankful for that. I hope you keep
up the good work.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Yours faithfully, <span style="color: red;">(Why so formal? You started the letter with Dear Diana, as if she was your friend)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0Germany51.165691 10.45152600000005840.944362 -10.202770999999942 61.387020000000007 31.105823000000058tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-8758388269281998452018-07-04T10:23:00.000-07:002018-09-23T04:37:26.369-07:00CPE Article on Gap Year <h2>
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><br />Hi Gustavo,<br />I hope you are doing fine! Could you please take a look at my article? I did not perform well in the last one so I expect to have learnt from my mistakes and do better in the present one <img alt="😊" class="CToWUd" data-goomoji="1f60a" data-image-whitelisted="" goomoji="1f60a" src="https://mail.google.com/mail/e/1f60a" style="margin: 0px 0.2ex; max-height: 24px; vertical-align: middle;" /><br />You can find the task attached to this e-mail. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><br /></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><br /></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">Regards</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">Alicia</span></span></span></h2>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">You have been asked to write an article
for Job Prospects magazine, a publication for 18-30 year olds, on the following
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">How taking a gap year*can enhance your
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*A gap year is a break usually taken between leaving school/college and
starting university, and is seen as a valuable way to gain work experience
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leisure opportunities for young people taking a gap year in your country (or a
country that you know well), the types of skills that can be gained and the
likely value of these to potential employers.<br style="mso-special-character: line-break;" />
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AN ADULT</span></h2>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Nowadays, taking a gap year is becoming
a popular trend among young people. Not only does it constitute a way to escape
from the daily routine, but also provides young people with a great opportunity
to learn new skills in preparation for their future jobs.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">The easiest option to gain experience
and learn useful skills in a gap year is volunteering to do social work. Volunteers have the
opportunity to gain a huge amount of valuable experience<strike>s</strike>, as helping other
human <strike>or animal</strike> beings or animals is <strike>so</strike> an enriching experience. Also, they usually learn
<strike>how to deal with different types of people </strike>soft skills, an ability which may be regarded as
useful in jobs such as hotel receptionist or project manager, where social
abilities and empathy are almost compulsory. Even so, volunteers should always
bear in mind that volunteering is not paid, which <strike>would be its most
discouraging feature.</strike> means thez will have to ask their parents for financial support.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Another option to consider is to travel
abroad and engage in the Au Pair community. Au Pairs are usually hosted by
foreign families in exchange of services, which often include looking after the
family’s children. The Au Pair programme has the advantage that the applicants
are paid for their services and have
the chance to attend a language course. This way, Au Pairs can learn a foreign
language as they are immersed in the target culture, broadening their horizons,
learning about cultures other than theirs and boosting their own confidence.
Being fluent in foreign languages and having a high self-steem are qualities which definitely will help these young people when looking for a job in the future.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Of course, taking a gap year is a
personal decision. We should weigh its pros and cons at an individual level
before making any decision, but in the light of its many personal and
professional benefits, parents should encourage their children to take a gap
year in order to take a step forward in their journey to maturity.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<br />Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-30295924936138815132018-07-03T11:40:00.000-07:002018-07-03T11:47:43.957-07:00Overcoming Writer´s Block<div>
<span style="color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">This </span><a href="https://medium.com/descript/overcoming-writers-block-with-automatic-transcription-f85bbb30eda6" style="color: black; font-family: "times new roman";"><span style="color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">article</span><span style="color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> </span></a><span style="font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">is originally published by <span style="color: #1155cc;"><u>Descript</u></span></span><span style="color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">.</span></div>
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">If you’re a writer — of books, essays, scripts, blog posts, whatever — </span></div>
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">you’re familiar with the phenomenon: the blank screen, a looming deadline, </span></div>
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">and a sinking feeling in your gut that pairs poorly with the jug of coffee you drank earlier.</span></div>
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">If you know that rumble all too well: this post is for you. </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Maybe it’ll help you get out of a rut; at the very least, it’s good for a few minutes of </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">procrastination.</span></div>
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Here’s the core idea: thinking out loud is often less arduous than writing. </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">And it’s now easier than ever to combine the two, </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">thanks to recent advances in speech recognition technology.</span></div>
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Of course, dictation is nothing new — and plenty of writers have taken advantage of it. </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Carl Sagan’s voluminous output was facilitated by his process of speaking </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">into an audio recorder, to be transcribed later by an assistant </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">(you can listen to some of his dictations in the </span><a href="https://www.loc.gov/collections/finding-our-place-in-the-cosmos-with-carl-sagan/articles-and-essays/carl-sagan-and-the-tradition-of-science/sagans-thinking-and-writing-process/" style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: underline; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Library of Congress</span></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">!) </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">And software like Dragon’s </span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: italic; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Naturally Speaking</span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"> has offered automated transcription </span><br />
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">But it’s only in the last couple of years that automated transcription has reached a sweet spot</span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"> — of convenience, affordability and </span><a href="https://medium.com/descript/comparing-the-accuracy-of-automatic-transcription-services-519fec134465" style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: underline; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">accuracy</span></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">—that makes it practical to use it more casually. </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">And I’ve found it increasingly useful for generating a sort of proto-first draft: </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">an alternative approach to the painful process of converting the nebulous wisps inside </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">your head into something you can actually work with.</span></div>
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">I call this process </span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: italic; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">idea extraction</span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"> (though these ideas may be more accurately </span><br />
<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">dubbed </span><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brain_Droppings" style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: underline; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">brain droppings</span></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">). </span></div>
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Gustavo Albarracinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-72082133519551535212018-07-03T06:44:00.000-07:002018-07-03T06:44:05.550-07:00CPE 2018 Letter to the editor Sample and feedback<span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">Hi Gustavo,</span><br />
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Hope you are doing well. I am taking my CPE exam this July, soI would be very grateful if you could review the writing that I attach to this email.</div>
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It is a letter to an editor (part 2 of the test), that should address the following points:</div>
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1) it should be about the topic of friendship;</div>
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2) it should mention a friendship that is special for me;</div>
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3) it should contain my opinion on the difficulties in mantaining frienships through time and changing circumstances.</div>
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Thank you very much!</div>
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Kind regards,</div>
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Ingrid.</div>
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<span style="color: red;">Feedback in red</span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;">Dear Editor,<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">I am
writing in reply to the article about friendship that was featured in the last issue
of your magazine and to which readers were invited to respond presenting their
views on the topic. <strike>Therefore, </strike>I would like to share some of my thoughts on this
subject with <strike>the magazine’s</strike> your readers.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="color: #222222;">It is often
said that friends are the family you choose for yourself, for true friends
remain by your side and unconditionally support you no matter what decisions
you make. As for me, I could not agree more with that statement. Thus, I see my
life-long friends, with whom I have a very special friendship, as family. Hence,
like my relatives, the friends who I have known since I was a kid, are a fundamental
pillar in my life. </span><span style="color: red;">(Would be nice to have some examples or anecdotes)</span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="color: #222222;">Some people
argue that friendships are subject to many changes over time, as childhood
friendships have little to do with teenage ones and even lesser with the ones had
during adult life, and that such changes may threaten the continuity of a
relationship. However, it is important to remember that real friends stand by
each other and strive to overcome the obstacles that they might face. </span><span style="color: red;">(An example maybe?)</span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="color: #222222;">Of course, as
time goes by, it may become more difficult to stay in touch with friends, either
because some of them </span><strike style="color: #222222;">might be living</strike><span style="color: #222222;"> live abroad, or because a large portion of their
time is now dedicated to their demanding jobs. Perhaps, some circumstances have
changed, and there are ones that have their own families and do not have much
time for meeting up. It is true that there is a handful of events that may end
up distancing friends or changing their relationship. Nonetheless, it is also
true that friends are the ones willing to remain in each other’s life, even
with all these adverse </span><u>facts.</u><span style="color: #222222;"> </span><span style="color: red;">(facts?)</span></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">The bottom
line is that personal relationships are never easy, and friendship in not an
exception to that, but they are also very valuable and worth fighting for. After
all, some friends are like family, and external factors should not stand in the
way. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Yours
faithfully,<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p>Ingrid (Lastname)</o:p></span></div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><o:p><span style="color: red;">Feedback: I would appreciate if you incorporate some examples, stories or anecdotes to make it less abstract. After all, it is not an essay. </span><span style="color: #222222;"> </span></o:p></span></div>
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