You read the following in an international
magazine :
Poverty
exists in almost every country and the difference between the rich and the
poor is growing all the time. What can we do about the situation ?
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The magazine has asked people to send in ideas
in the form of a proposal, suggesting ways of reducing poverty. You decide to
send in a proposal
280-320 words
TIP: A proposal should have a title and subtitles. And of course ideas (recommendations/proposals) to solve a problem.
There is usually first: an introductory paragraph and a paragraph to explain the problem or current situation. Then follow the recommendations. There needs to be a conexion between the Current Situation paragraph and the Recommmendation paragraphs.
Proposal on economy inequality in the world
Introduction
The aim of
this proposal is to present ideas on how to tackle the problem of the international growing
inequality between the rich and the poor.
Current
situation
The latest statistics
show an earth-shattering gap between the rich and the poor with one fifth of
the world’s population living beneath the poverty threshold . This gap can be
accounted for the changes in the structure of the population and the labour
market. The mentioned gap is very evident especially in three aspects: Education, work and income.
Education
In view of the
growing number of undereducated people emphasis should be put on education.
All the children that will represent the new generation should be given the chance to pursue studies in higher
education. It is also of paramount importance that schools equip all young people with the skills
required to fit with the labour market . (TIP: Say how.) It is necessary for the Government, for example to provide all classrooms with internet and teach students to speak a foreign language.
Work
Inequalities
in the labour market is not to be forgotten. Policies to protect the unemployed should be implemented, (tip: give examples) take the example of Germany, where people receive help from the government when they lose their jobs and need to look for a new one.
To promote new working opportunities, the National Employment Agencies can work in close
collaboration with businesses and the Government
should grant subventions to any companies willing to create new jobs and thus help reducing the unemployment rate.
Income
The widening
income gap also suggest that measures should be put into effect . Unemployed
people should be guaranteed welfare benefits and also equality of salaries, this is to say for example that men and women who do the same job, should be paid the same amount of money.
Conclusion
It is urgent to implement measures to reduce inequalities. Shall the ideas mention above be taken into consideration, it is my belief the poverty would decrese and there would be a marked improvement in the people’s lives.
It is urgent to implement measures to reduce inequalities. Shall the ideas mention above be taken into consideration, it is my belief the poverty would decrese and there would be a marked improvement in the people’s lives.
340 words
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