Good morning Gustavo, I have read in your blog that you offer yourself to correct CPE writings I have decided to send you one so you could give me some comments and feedback in respect.
Thank you,
Clara Grau
Thank you,
Clara Grau
You
read this comment recently in a literary magazine about a book you
enjoyed reading. “The author’s use of language to build up
atmosphere and to give insights into the characters’ thoughts and
emotions is not as effective as it could be. This was a disappointing
aspect of the book”. You disagree and decide to write a letter to
the magazine, expressing your opinion. Write between 280 and 320
words.
Dear
Sir/Madam,
I am
writing to you because I disagree with a comment posted in your last
week’s magazine issue about the last novel of Sarah Nuttall, and I would
like to give my opinion in respect to it. For the past two months, I
have been experiencing a tough time due to family problems and it has
been very difficult to me to find something to entertain myself with
and give me the necessary energy to keep going. However, this changed
last week, when I started reading the book I mentioned before (name of the book).
The
novel is based on a real case and tells the story of a young woman
whose family dies in a plane crash and has to get through this
horrible situation all alone. Despite seeming a drama at the very
beginning, you soon begin to realize that the last thing she is going
to do is giving up. Thanks to the simplicity of the author’s
language, the reader is able to get an idea of her feelings and take
her place to understand the emptiness she is experiencing. (You "entertain yourself" reading about a plane crash? )
Contrarily
to what superreader
expresses in his comment, I believe that Nuttall achieves to
perfectly describe the thoughts of the main character and her
disorientation after the tragedy. Although it is true that she does
not use a very detailed and descriptive vocabulary referring to
emotions, this is perfectly understandable to me because, by doing
this, she avoids an overdose of sentimentalism and allows the reader
to imagine by his own.
Being
always in favour of the freedom of speech and opinion, I think it is
positive to see that your impression of a book can differ
substantially from the one of another reader. Nevertheless, to help
your readers decide whether to buy it or not, I would like to
recommend you that you include including more than one opinion for every single
work you talk about book that is discussed.
Yours
faithfully,
Clara
Grau
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