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Victoria
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Your college magazine has asked people to write a review of a film that they feel presents a positive picture of young people’s lives today. You decide to write a review, describing a film, explaining what it shows about young people and why you chose it.
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Review on the film Eat, Pray, Love: An insight on today´s young generation
Being a millennial means not only having been born between 1980 and 1995 but also a completely different way of living. Today’s young people –usually known as Millennials or Generation Y- have transformed their lives’ prospects into unstructured lifestyles which were unimaginable a decade ago. (Feedback: The Intro is about young people, but try to connect it with the film also. The Intro should give us an idea of what you are going to write about, and should engage us to want to read more).
As proof of this, the film Eat, Pray, Love tells Liz Gilbert’s story based on her real experience. After having got a really comfortable house, an excellent job and an apparently perfect husband, she realizes she has found everything in life but her inner self. Despite of having obtained whatever she struggled for, she feel lost, distressed and unsatisfied. To make mattes worse, she also has to go through a divorce that devastates her. This difficult situation leads her to go out of her comfort zone, risking everything to change her life. She embarks on a journey around the world looking for a self-discovery. As a result of her experience all over the world, she realizes that she had always had more than she needed, but she had taken it for granted. (I find the paragraph a little bit too long, and I am missing important information about the film, like the name of the female star and the year of production, maybe setting also).
Personally, I feel strongly identified with Liz Gilbert’s experience, because it sincerely shows how young people approach their lives and job plans. Eat, Pray, Love addresses this perspective in such an enriching way that watching it is a must for young generations. (Feedback: Why did you choose this film? What makes it better than other films?)
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