Thursday, 2 March 2017
CPE Writing correction and feedback
Hola Gustavo, he leido en tu blog que corriges writings, te mando el mio para ver si me lo podrías corregir.
TASK: An international travel magazine is running a series of articles on alternatives to travelling by plane. The magazine has invited readers to send in articles briefly describing a memorable long-distance train or bus journey they have made. The article should explain the advantages of travelling a long distance by train or bus and consider whether in general travelling to your destination more slowly may result in a more satisfying travel experience.
Write your article.
(Feedback: I don't see a connection between the title and the text)
on the verge
of booking about to book a rather expensive plane-ticket to Berlin sit when I recalled something that my
sister had said the week before. She insisted on suggested something I
had never even considered thought of. 'Why don´t you go by train?' she told me. And due to a belief that I am still unable to
I was in a budget and kind of looking forward to an adventure, so I decided to give it a try.
As you can see, in this case, there was nothing but advantages. As a consequence of the large amount of time that I spent there, I met new people and had time to have a relaxed journey. Apart from that, getting to travel eco-friendly means a great deal to the environment, therefore, it is rather satisfying.
Dear Fernando, to be totally honest, you need to improve your grammar and vocabulary for the CPE exam.
The CPE exam is very demanding and they expect you to write a text with very advanced features of the language.
I invite you to continue working on your writings. Please keep in touch and recommend the blog to your friends.