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Eliza Fernandez
MEDIA AND INTRUSION
Everybody will agree to the point that
over the past few years the extent of intrusion of the media has made into the private
lives of individuals is unblustering for they are subsequently
facing denigration to their right of privacy increased. The media has deviated from the informative role it once played in finding people
important news on papers or containing useful information one sought
all these have been mitigated since media and has engaged itself more
into publishing facts and information related to private lives of
famous individuals . How come the issue does not concern us ? (Feedback: Introduction hast to be short and to the point).
In most part the media is constantly tying
up with the sort of news demanded from public part in that falls a
section of people interested to stay tuned up with daily updates
coming from glamour world which at large focus on the life of
celebrities, film stars, directors politicians and the day to day
gossips they pass on to media. In some cases, it becomes more serious
when media stalk them and even paparazzize them only to add more
publicity to their channels. Furthermore, flashing those sensitive
issues like death, personal loss, crimes ,war or moments of major
humanitarian crisis under the title of “ Breaking News” on tv
screen is an evidence of media’s money making formula devised only
to shaming the society. (Too many words. Go straight to the point. Task says: Outline the problems the media causes and how they affect the individual)
It is not expected from media to
continue meddling with the personal life of people without their
consent. I strongly agree that not only media but people are also
responsible for encouraging media to interfere; for they want to dig
more into others’ lives. In my belief, law has little to do to
stop media’s outrageous nature therefore, common people have to
come forward to protest against the arbitery nature long sustained
by media. In addition, I opine that offenders committing crimes like
paparazzi, stalking should be harshly punished. Last but not least,
people should learn to adopt a more sympathetic and moral outlook
towards those in grief.
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