The task comes from a book called "Succeed in Cambridge English: Proficiency" by Andrew Betsis, Sean Haughton and Lawrence Mamas published by GLOBAL ELT. |
Essay on technology, young prople and communication nowadays.
Technology
is the fastest-growing field of our time. Nevertheless, there does
not seem to be much middle ground when discussing its advantages and
disadvantages for young people. The first passage critiques the high
dependency of youngsters on technology and expounds ways in which it
harms them. The second one praises it, showing us the other side of
the coin, high level of interaction among people, awareness of
worl-wide events and 24-hour availability of information.
Three
main ideas are explored throughout the first text: first of all,
juveniles being so addicted to computer-type technology which
allegedly prevents them from expressing themselves properly.
Secondly, the immense amount of time they weekly spend online
(playing games or writing posts on social networks) directly ensues
in “social incompetence”, as defined by the author. Thirdly and
in relation to the latter scenario, it is suggested that young users
of these platforms are far from serving its original purpose: social
interaction.
On
the other hand, the second text weighs in positively on the myriad
ways in which this so-called communication revolution unites and
keeps people informed. Firstly, it is stated place and time-wise
limits are no longer an issue when interacting. Moreover, not only do
Skype, messaging and other applications make possible instant
communication, but they also make people more aware of what happens
in the world. Finally, the endless information available thanks to
this revolution is certainly thought commendable on the grounds of a
more informed and discerning juvenile.
In
conclusion, technology can be perilous or useful depending on how it
is used. As a young student, I strongly believe it to be extremely
useful, as a source of information, as a way to quick-share
knowledge, and as a way to make inexpensive interaction possible.
Sent by Patricia de Pastors
Number of words: 280
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