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EXAM TASK:
You belong to a committee that helps to
organise a yearly music festival in your hometown. This year’s event has
just taken place and you have been asked by the event leader to write a short report highlighting its success and making recommendations for next year.
Write your report in 280-320 words
REPORT ON THE MUSIC FESTIVAL
INTRODUCTION
The aim of this
report is to outline the great success of the very first Music Festival which
took place in Chantilly last month. This report will also give recommendations
for the organisation of next year’s event in Senlis, France.
SUCCESSFUL PUBLICITY
Informing as many
people as possible about this novelty was crucial. To that purpose a press file
was scrupulously prepared and largely distributed to the newspapers of the local
press and some specialised web sites in music. The event was so well publicised
that more than 10 000 people attended it, which was beyond all expectations.
SUCCESSFUL
PERFORMANCES
The music festival
took place during a whole week-end. Many music schools from everywhere in the
region greatly came forward and gave violin, guitar
and piano concerts in front of the crowd gathered there. The biggest success of
this festival was its closing, during which the best musicians were given
prizes for their outstanding performances by the mayor himself.
INCONVENIENCES PRESENTED
The sound system
provided was of great help however we somehow regret the poor quality of the
mikes and loudspeakers, which affected the quality of the sound in the
concerts.
RECOMMENDATION FOR THE MUSIC FESTIVAL NEXT YEAR
On the basis of the
points mentioned above, I strongly recommend having an even more aggressive
marketing campaign next year. I advise hiring a professional to design
eye-catching leaflets and posters to be distributed among the local press and
in social networking sites. I also suggest considering the viability of purchasing
new sound equipment which is of great importance especially for a music
festival.
Another
recommendation would be inviting a huge celebrity to the closing ceremony to attract an even greater crowd.
Posted by SYB
Edited by Gustavo Albarracín
CPE Practice.
Now it is your turn to practise for the CPE Cambridge Exam. Write a Report using the task above. If you want to have your writing edited and posted in the blog, you can send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com
CPE Practice.
Now it is your turn to practise for the CPE Cambridge Exam. Write a Report using the task above. If you want to have your writing edited and posted in the blog, you can send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com
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