CPE Exam 2019 Sample Report

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International Film Club Report 2018-2019

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Events (Last year's events, better?)

Reminiscing on the International Film Club’s (IFC) past year (change or eliminate), the club’s "Italian film weekend", which was held in February, proved to be a great success with many members expressing their encouragement. This leads (past tense?) the club’s board to give consideration to a recurrence of the popular event in the year of 2020. Furthermore, the annual dinner with this year’s special guest John Favreau held at the Shoreditch Hotel was a well-attended success (change) as ever.

Future plans

In the year of 2019-2020, IFC is determined to bring even more interesting cinematic insights to its esteemed members. Not only can the board confirm it has recently tied down director Anthony Russo for a lecture on suspense in blockbusters (scheduled to be held in December 2019 at the club’s headquarters in London), but it can also corroborate new plans of an advanced video library. IFC members will be enabled to consult this database at the club’s headquarters as well as at our website. (In general some sentences are too long)

Finances

This year’s earnings consists of (check "consist of")) the contribution of 32 fresh members and the generous £30,000 grant from the National Film Association. This adds up to an income of £38,000. All outgoing expenses this year comprise the renting of films and the purchase of new stationery, such as a suitable film projector and the furnishing of the recently procured meeting room. These cost £20,100. This leaves us with a rough grand total of £20,700 to spend on the organisation of further club meetings. Everything taken into account, the International Film Club will be faring well in the year of 2019-2020.

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