Thursday, 17 May 2018
CAE 2018 Proposal sample and feedback
Sample sent by Donato M
feedback in red
On account of the current lack of support offered to the college’s international students, this proposal is intended to make some suggestions as to how the website could better cater to their needs.
PROVIDING USEFUL INFORMATION
After closely examining the website’s content, it became evident that information regarding seminars and local events
was is insufficient. Therefore, I would recommend providing accurate timetables giving and a clear
overview of what seminars and events international students have the chance to can experience attend at our
college. Not only would this enable them to acclimatise to the new environment,
but they would also raise their cultural awareness, which is crucial when
studying abroad. (check last sentence)
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that, should these suggestions be implemented effectively, the website will prove to be a useful tool for any foreign student willing to study here and that their permanence at our college will definitely be much more enjoyable. (Try breaking this long sentence is two to make it reader friendlier).