Read the two texts below. Write an essay summarising and evaluating the key points from both text. Use your own words throughout as far as possible and include your own ideas in your answers. Write the essay. (around 240-280 words)
Doing sport everyday keeps the doctor away
I find the text well-written and in fact I only had to make a couple of minor changes (a preposition or article here and there). What I think needs checking is the organisation of the text. What I usually see in textbooks, and what students usually do, is to have 4 paragraphs: introduction, summary of text one plus opinions, summary of text two plus opinions and conclusion.